一. 首先看一下高考阅卷老师如何评分。

拿到你的作文，批卷老师大概读一下，会在心中确立一个等级，一等是21分到25分，二等是16分到20分，三等是11分到15分......最要命的是，一旦老师心中确立了你的等级，就不愿意再更改了!也就是说，接下来细看你作文写得好坏，也只是在相应等级内变动了!

所以说，老师的一念之间，作文就会拉开等次!

这就要我们想尽一切办法给老师留下一等文的第一印象!这样，作文的分数，一般只是在相应等级内变动了。

二. 如何提升作文档次

1.简单的改用一些单词也会有意向不到的效果：如

用extraordinary代替very:十个人九个用very而你用extraordinary，那你不就与众不同了吗.

用significant代替important

用as a consequence代替as a result

用therefore代替so,举个例子，I got up early，therefore i was late.

写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西，不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词，少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候，不应该之说nice这样空洞的词，应该使用一些诸如generous，humorous，interesting，smart，gentle，warm-hearted，hospital之类的形象词。

简单的替换一下，水平立刻显现出不一样了

2.善用连接词把短句改长句

如，一个句子+逗号+however+另一个句子，这里面however是没有实际意义的，就是表转折，但你可以用这招把两个简单句捏在一块啊!短句子成长句了!

都希望写下很长的句子，像个老外似的，可就是怕写错，怎么办，最保险的写长句的方法就是这些，可以在任何句子之间加and，但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说：I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.

如果是二者并列的，我们可以用一个超级句式：Not only the furcoat is soft，but it is also warm.

◆其他连接词：

表递进关系，用 "furthermore”， "what is more”

表转折：however/but 但是

表对比：not that …but that…不是…而是…/ one hand….on the other hand一方面…另一 方面…/ unlike…与…不同/not so much….as…与其…不如…

表目的：for the……….为了…

表因果：therefore因此，所有/ so 所以

表例证：for example

表假设：if 如果

表让步：although…虽然……(注意：后不可接but!虽然但是不可这样连用)/of course 当然…/clearly…显然…

◆ 相关过渡语

1)表示时间顺序： first， then， afterwards， meanwhile， later，first of all， finally， at last…

2)表示空间顺序： near， next to， far from， in front of， on the left， on one side…

3)表示比较、对照： like， unlike， such as， but， however， on the other hand， on the contrary， nevertheless， otherwise…

4)表示因果关系： because， for， as a result， therefore， thus…

5)表示递进关系： besides， what’s more， what was worse， moreover， furthermore， in addition， on top of…

6)表示并列关系： and， as well as， also…

7)表示总结性： in general， in a word， in short， on the whole， to sum up， in brief， to conclude

3. 巧妙修改句式

举个例子，我不光唱歌，而且跳舞怎么说?i not onle sing ，but also dance，改动一下，not only do i sing，but also dance.倒装句!

I think that...... 宾语从句，老师批10张卷子看到8张里面有I think that不烦吗?如果一定要用宾语从句的话换一种说法：I have a thought that......别看只改动了一点，同位语从句!

同样I hear that谁都会用，不过同样谁都会用最好不要用!厉害一些的人会用：It is reported that......

牛人会用There is a piece of news that 同样的意思，但明显比I hear that要帅!

还有一种用并列巨额代替定语从句，不仅可以用来凑字数，还很醋。举个例子，我喜欢玩篮球，然后篮球有很多种特点，就可以把这些特点用定语从句的形式并列出来：I love basketball，which is......，which is......，which is.......

还有种用法叫后置定语有人感觉挺难吧，其实记住个例子就行了，穿着比基尼的女孩a girl who wears a bikini，变成a girls wearing a bikini就行了，这就是后置定语，很简单吧

最终的目的都是为了让作文与众不用，让阅卷老师眼前一亮!

三.高考英语作文写作时的注意事项

1.减少误拼

高考答题时，尽量别出现单词拼写错误，要是比较长的单词拼错了还好说，那种最简单的单词千万不要拼错!扣的不是一分的问题，有可能影响到等级。

2.注意卷面清爽，不要涂涂改改

现在高考改卷，是把每一块分类用扫描仪扫描放到电脑里面。比如作文那一块，会被单独扫出来，放在电脑里以后，改卷的人看着投影仪上呈现出被放大了的段落，同时给出心里的分数，按下想给的分数。几个人的分数会根据系统判断，差别不大的话取平均值。差别大了，才会拉评分组组长来看。(依旧是被屏幕放大了的字)。所以，字写得好坏，一旦被放大，差别就不那么大了，最主要的是让改试卷的看得清爽，眼睛不累。同时注意的是，最好不要涂涂改改，不然看起来觉得很不舒服，很麻烦。只要注意卷面清爽，就可以了。

四：最后分享一些可替换使用的单词

1.occur 替换 think of

Suddenly I had an idea that someone had broken into my house. →

An idea occurred to me that someone had broken into my house.

It occurred to me that someone had broken into my house.

2.devote替换spend

He spends all his spare time in reading. →

He devotes all his spare time to reading.

3.seek替换want / look for

They sought ( wanted ) to hide themselves behind the trees.

4.average 替换ordinary

I’m an average ( ordinary ) student.

5.but替换very

The film we saw last night was very interesting. →

The film we saw last night was nothing but interesting.

The film we saw last night was anything but boring.

6.seat 替换sit

On his way to school， he found an old lady seated (sitting) by the road， looking worried.

7.suppose 替换should

He is supposed to ( should ) have driven more slowly.

8.appreciate 替换thank

Thank you very much for you help. →

We appreciate your help very much. / Your help is much appreciated.

9.the case替换 true

I don’t think it is the case ( true ).

10.on替换as soon as

As soon as he arrived， he began his research. → On his arrival， he began his research..

11.due to替换because of

He arrived late due to ( because of ) the storm.

12.cover替换walk/read

After covering (walking) 10 miles， we all felt tired.

13.contribute to替换 be helpful/useful

Plenty of memory work is undoubtedly helpful to English study. →

Plenty of memory work will undoubtedly contribute to English study.

14.round the corner 替换 coming soon/ nearby

① The summer vacation is round the corner ( coming). Do you have any plans?

② Li Ming studies in a school round the corner (nearby).

15.come to light替换discover

The family were so pleased when they discovered the lost jewels. →

The family were so pleased when the lost jewels came to light.

16.have a ball替换have a good time/ enjoy oneself

After visiting the workshop， we went back to school. Every one of us had a ball ( had a good time ).

17.come up with替换think of

Jack is very clever. He often comes up with ( thinks of ) new ideas.

18.set aside替换save

Some students think that they should set aside some of their pocket money for books.

19.be of + n. 替换adj.

The products are of high quality (very good ) and are sold everywhere in China.

20.refer to 替换talk about/of， mention

The professor you referred to (talked about ) is very famous.