作者:未知 时间:2020-05-26 阅读:( )
【经典例题】
近日,新型冠状病毒肺炎爆发,假如你是李明,你的湖北同学小鹏感到非常的害怕,请你写一封信,告诉他不要怕。
内容包括:(1)告诉他不要紧张;
(2)如何预防病毒﹙勤洗手,多通风,出门戴口罩等;
(3)要相信自己。(要求100字左右)
【写作秘籍】
审:审题
列:列提纲
填:填要点
连:连词成句,连句成文
检:要点齐全,单词拼写、语法运用正确
Step1 审
①人称:第一人称&第二人称
②时态一般现在时
③内容:建议信
Step2 列
①首段:说明建议的主题=表达安慰+同心理解+引出建议
安慰表达: I am very sorry to hear that …
同心理解:Actually, it is very common for everyone to…
引出建议:I'd love to offer you some useful advice.
②正文:提出建议
勤洗手: wash your hands often.
多通风: You often open the windows in order to keep the room clear.
出门戴口罩:wear a mask when you go out
③尾段:表达希望
I hope you can find my suggestions useful …Believe yourself.
Step3 填
①首段
安慰表达: I am very sorry to hear that you are in difficult situation.
同心理解:And you are upset about the novel coronavirus pneumonia. Actually, it is very common for everyone to be worried about it.
引出建议:As for it, I'd love to offer you some useful advice.
②正文
I think it is necessary to get enough sleep. Without enough sleep, we get sleepy. You should have the healthy food, such as fresh vegetables, fresh fruit. It is important for good health.
It is a good idea for you to wash your hands often. You are supposed to open the windows in order to keep the room clear. And you should also wear a mask when you go out.
③尾段
I hope you can find my suggestions useful and if there are further questions, please ask me. Don’t be afraid. Everything will be fine. Believe yourself!
Step4 连
Dear Xiaopeng,
I am very sorry to hear that you are in difficult situation. And you are upset about the novel coronavirus pneumonia. Actually, it is quite common for everyone to be worried about it. As for it, I'd love to offer you some useful advice.
To begin with, I think it is necessary to get enough sleep. Without enough sleep, we get sleepy. What's more, you should have the healthy food, such as fresh vegetables, fresh fruit. It is important for good health. It is a good idea for you to wash your hands often. Because you need to reduce the virus. At last, You are supposed to open the windows in order to keep the room clear. And you should also wear a mask when you go out.
I hope you can find my suggestions useful and if there are further questions, please ask me. Don’t be afraid. Everything will be fine. Believe yourself!
Yours, Li Ming
Step5 检
【检查要点是否齐全,单词拼写是否正确,语法运用是否正确】


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