Module 6

 

模块话题

 

如何写以“problems”为话题的作文

本模块以“ Problems＂”为话题，讲述了青少年在成长过程中遇到的一些问题，要求学生能正视问题、解决问题。通过本模块的学习,学生应学会描述问题并给出解决方法。

 

高频句式

 

1. It’s not necessary to worry about… 没有必要担心…

2. I'd like to share my ideas, which I think might help

我想分享我的想法，我认为这可能会有所帮助。

3. If you……,you can……… 如果你……,你会……

4. It’s better(not) to do sth. 最好(不)做某事。

 

典例部析

 

在我们青少年的成长过程中，既有快乐，也有烦恼。请用英文写一篇短文,内容包括:

1.你在学校或家里曾经遇到的最大的问题或烦恼；

2.你解决问题或烦恼的过程;

3.你的感想。

要求:1.词数:80～100，开头已给出，不计入总词数；

2.文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。

My teenage life is colorful. During the school year, not only do I have happy times, but I

 

have many kinds of problems. My biggest problem is

 

写作模板

 

引出话题—写出自己遇到的问题或烦恼--- have too much homework, seem endless, stay up late, feel tired

 

陈述方法—详细描写自己解决该问题或烦恼的办法--- deal with, concentrate on, as quickly as possible, spend less time

 

简要总结—写出自已的感想 ---practice makes perfect, be active to face problems

 

满分范文

 

My teenage life is colorful. During the school year, not only do I have happy times, but I have many kinds of problems. My biggest problem is that I have too much homework .Homework seems endless. It always makes me stay up late and I feel very tired every day, but I know the teachers are expecting us to be better.

How can I deal with the problem? On the one hand, I should concentrate more on my study in class. On the other hand，I should do the homework as quickly as possible. Now, I spend less time on my homework. and I am not frustrated any more.

As we all know, practice makes perfect. Complaining or waiting can't help. Instead, we should be active to face our problems.

 

借鉴提升

 

◆本文是一篇讲述自己遇到的问题或麻烦的文章，包含三个步骤:

1.引出话题，写出自己遇到的问题或麻烦(第一段)。

2.详细描写自己解决该问题或麻烦的办法(第二段)。

3. 写出自己的感想(第三段)。

◆本文添彩点: not only…but…,On the one hand……On the other hand……,Complaining or waiting can't help.

 

Module 7

模块话题

 

如何写以“介绍名人、名著”为话题的作文

本模块以谈论名人、名著为话题。而最能全面体现模块话题及语言运用能力的话题作文就是“谈论最喜欢的书”，这可以使学生巩固所学知识并能灵活运用所学知识进行语言输出。写作时注意以下几个方面：

1.首先要介绍喜爱的书名、作者及主要人物。

2.介绍喜爱的原因及内容(简要介绍)。

3.阅读后的收获及感悟。

高频句式

 

1. The book I like best/ My favourite book is…我最喜欢的一本书是…

2. It is written by…它是由…创作的。

3.This book tells about…这本书讲述了…

4. The main character(s) in this book is/are…这本书中的主要人物是…

5. I like the book because...我喜欢这本书,因为…

6. It tells us…它告诉我们…

7. We can learn… from the book.我们可以从书中学到…

8. I think we should…我认为我们应该…

 

典例部析

 

请以“ My favourite book＂为题，写一篇80词左右的英语作文，简要介绍一下你喜欢的书，并阐述你喜欢这本书的原因。

提示:如果你喜欢的书是 Harry Potter，下面的内容可能会对你有帮助:1.作者:J.K. Rowling;2.故事很长，但有趣;3.Harry很勇敢,勇于与敌人抗争。

 

 

写作模板

 

开篇点题—写明你最喜欢的那本书--- I like…… best/ My favourite book is……

 

展开描述—书的基本情况，比如作者、内容等--- ……written by……,……describes……

 

发表感悟—喜爱这本书的原因及感悟 ---……for many reasons. First…Second…

 

满分范文

 

My Favourite Book

I enjoy reading different kinds of books, but Harry Potter Is my favourite. It was written by a British woman writer, J. K. Rowling. The book describes a brave and clever boy named Harry Potter.

I like this book best for many reasons. The story is very long but I am interested in it. First of all. the main character, Harry Potter dares to fight against powerful enemies. Secondly, his Z-shaped scar and magic stick bring me into a magical world. In fact, the story is so meaningful that I can learn a lot from it. The book helped me work out many difficulties in my life. I think it's the best book I've ever read. If you haven't read it yet, you’d better read it now.

 

借鉴提升

 

◆本文是一篇写自己最喜欢的书的文章，主要包含4个步骤

1.介绍这本书的书名和作者(第一段第1-2句)。

2.介绍这本书的主角(第一段第3句)。

3.具体介绍自己喜欢这本书的原因(第二段第3-6句)。

4.自己的阅读感悟(第二段第7-8句)。

◆本文的添彩点:文章的时态运用恰当、准确，各个要点衔接紧密，行文连贯，使用许多好的短语，如: enjoy doing，kinds of，for many reasons，be interested in， fight against，bring…into， work out等;好的句子结构,如: First of all…,Secondly…,In fact…, so…that, I think…等，语言简洁，结构合理。

 

Module 8

模块话题

 

如何写以“体育运动”为话题的作文

本模块主要讲述了“体育运动”。这种话题通常围绕人们日常的体育锻炼展开。写这类文章时，可按时间顺序介绍自己一天的体育活动安排，然后介绍一下自己最喜欢的体育活动。在结尾可总结一下体育运动对自己的影响。文章中可适当借鉴本模块Unit2中出现的经典句型。

 

高频句式

 

1. In the morning，I usually… 在早上,我通常…

2. After breakfast, I... 早饭后,我…

3. At school, I… 在学校，我…
4. …is my favourite sport. I also join in… ……是我最喜欢的运动。我还参加了……

5. I’ have never been… 我从未……

6. After supper, I often... 晚饭后,我经常…

7. I like sports, which makes me healthy, strong and energetic/ full of energy.我喜欢体育运动,它使我健康、强壮且充满活力。

 

典例部析

 

根据下面的资料写一篇有关李娜的短文，不少于80词。

1.李娜1982年2月26日出生于湖北省武汉市。

2.六岁时，在父亲的影响下，开始练习打羽毛球。

3.1997年，加入国家网球队。2002年底，在华中科技大学学习。

4.2014年1月25日，获得澳网公开赛女子单打冠军( Australian Open women＇s singles title)，这是她继2011年法网登顶后再次夺得大满贯赛冠军，也是亚洲人首度夺得澳网单打冠军。

My favourite sportswoman

 

 

写作模板

 

基本情况介绍—姓名、性别、职业等--- a famous…tennis player, the symbol of…

 

个人成就介绍—成长经历、主要成就或事迹---was born on…,at the age of…,won…

 

评价—喜爱、敬佩 ---are proud of…

 

满分范文

 

My Favourite sportswoman

My favourite sportswoman is Li Na, a famous professional tennis player. She is also the symbol of China's sporting success.

Li Na was born on February 26, 1982 in Wuhan, Hubei, China. At the age of six, Li Na started playing badminton, following his father’s footsteps. She joined China’s National Tennis Team in 1997. At the end of 2002,she studied at Huazhong University of Science and Technolgy. She won the 2014 Australian Open women's singles title on January 25, 2014 and became the champion to win a Grand Slam again after she had already won the 2011 French Open women's singles title. She becomes the first player from an Asian country to win thee Australian Open singles title.

Li Na is one of the greatest Chinese tennis players and we are proud of her because of her good performance.

 

借鉴提升

 

1.本文分三步介绍了自己最喜欢的体育明星。第一段简单介绍了明星的基本情况，第二段详细描写了她的成长经历及主要事迹，第三段进行了总结评价。

2.文章结构完整，脉络清晰。语言流畅，语法准确。

3.恰当运用了本模块所学的 the symbol of，Asian，be proud of等单词和短语。

 

Module 9

 

写作要求

 

本模块的主要话题是“发明”,围绕这一话题谈论历史上及日常生活中的一些重要发明及其用途。在具体的写作中,学生应做到以下几点:

1.能简单介绍某项发明的历史、用途以及特点等;

2.能介绍自己想发明的东西,并说明其用途及发明它的原因;

3.能正确使用一般将来时的被动语态。

 

写作积累

 

【常用词汇】

electronic 电子的

technology 科技;技术

memory 存储器

powerful 有影响力的

spread 传播;蔓延

introduction 引进;采用;推行

store 存储;储藏

replace 替换;取代

development 发展

a large amount of 大量

as a result 因此

at a time 每次;一次

in a way 在某种程度上

compare...to 把……比作

look through 浏览

 

【常用句型】

Will computers be used more than books in the future?

Knowledge and ideas spread faster than ever before.

Today,with the invention of the computer and electronic technology,it’s easy to get information on the Internet.

The Internet was invented by the US government in the 1960s,for the army to use.

Telephone is widely used and plays an important role in our daily life now.

It has a long history of...

When I grow up,I want to invent...because...

With the development of...,our life has changed a lot.

It seems impossible to imagine life without them.

 

范文欣赏

 

目前电子书包开始在一些学校试用,请你用英语写一篇文章,介绍不同的人对电子书包的看法。

【审题思路】

1.审人称:在描述他人对电子书包的看法时,要用第三人称;描述自己的看法时,用第一人称。

2.审时态:本文主要介绍大家对电子书包的不同观点,因此全文可以用一般现在时表达。

3.注意事项:

(1)在陈述观点时,可以恰当运用逻辑词和短语,使文章层次分明;

(2)交替使用简单句与复合句,使文章句式丰富。

 

【写作提纲】

1.开篇点题:电子书包是否会被广泛使用。(make a survey,widely used...)

2.介绍电子书包的功用以及人们对它的看法:有用、方便、易携带等。(useful,convenient,easy to carry)

3.总结:提出你的观点。(We shouldn’t use it more...)

 

【优秀范文】

Recently I made a survey about the use of the electronic schoolbag.Do you think electronic schoolbags can be widely used in the future?

The electronic schoolbag is like a computer.You can find out what you want to learn.My classmates think that electronic schoolbags are useful,convenient and they have more functions,such as listening to music.And parents also think the electronic schoolbags are easy to carry and children’s backs and necks may not be hurt.But my English teacher doesn’t think we should use it,because he thinks students may use it just for fun instead of studying.

I believe the electronic schoolbag is bad for our eyes and a waste of energy.In a word,we shouldn’t use it more in the future.

 

实战演练

 

假设你是李华,你发明了一种会讲话的垃圾箱。请你写一篇英语短文在英语课上向同学们介绍你的发明,并向你的同学们推销这款垃圾箱。

要点:1.用途;

2.特别之处;

3.价格。

注意:1.词数80~100;

2.根据要点适当添加内容,以使行文连贯。

Boys and girls,may I have your attention,please?Today I will introduce my new invention to you.It’s a special box which is used for holding waste.It can speak different languages.As soon as people throw away wastes on the street,they will be cleaned up by the box at once.At the same time,the box will tell people not to do that again.Of course,my box doesn’t cost too much.In this way,more cleaners will do less work and much money can be saved.What do you think of my invention?Will it be helpful to improve the environment?If you want one,please come here.

 

Module 10

 

写作要求

 

本模块以“澳大利亚及其特色”为话题,介绍了澳大利亚的历史、饮食和文化风俗等。在具体的写作中,学生应做到以下几点:

1.能把自己喜欢的国家或城市推荐给自己的朋友;

2.能根据所给的提示介绍某个国家或城市的特点、旅游景点等;

3.能运用由that引导的定语从句来描述自己的旅游经历。

 

写作积累

 

【常用词汇】

central 中心的

magical 神奇的;迷人的

northeast 在东北的

spirit 精灵;精神

in many ways 在很多方面

according to 根据;按照;据……所说

keep sb./sth.away (使)避开;(使)不靠近

keep a diary 写日记

brush sth.off sth.把某物从某物上刷掉

at the time 那时;在那段时间

be surprised at 对……感到惊奇

during different periods of 在……不同时期

in the southern part of 在……的南方

have a close relationship with 与……关系紧密

【常用句型】

Bondi Beach is the most beautiful beach that I have ever seen.

According to the local people,it’s a special and magical place.

I was surprised at how big it was.

I have been looking forward to visiting it for a long time.

I think you must be interested in them.

 

范文欣赏

【典型例题】

澳大利亚是一个美丽的国家,旅游资源非常丰富。假设你是李明,想参加你校组织的澳大利亚夏令营。请根据下面的写作要点,给学校领导写一封信。

要点:1.个人情况介绍:李明,男,15岁,擅长英语和游泳;

2.你想在澳大利亚做的事情;

3.你对这次夏令营的憧憬。

【审题思路】

1.审人称:在介绍个人的基本情况以及描述个人的愿望憧憬时,要用第一人称。

2.审时态:本文主要是描述个人的基本状况,以及对本次夏令营的憧憬,故用一般现在时或一般将来时表达。

3.注意事项:

(1)在陈述个人情况时,可以恰当运用连接词和短语,使文章结构层次分明,条理清晰;

(2)交替使用简单句与复合句,以提高文章档次。

【写作提纲】

1.介绍自己,并说明想参加学校的夏令营。(take part in,a summer trip to Australia)

2.介绍自己想在澳大利亚做的事。(see the scenery,have a good time with friends,talk to foreigners)

3.总结:提出希望。(have a chance to go,look forward to)

【优秀范文】

Dear Sir/Madam,

I’m Li Ming,a 15-year-old student in Grade Nine.I hope that you can let me take part in the summer camp “A Trip to Australia”.

I’m good at English and swimming,so I will enjoy myself if I can get the opportunity for this summer camp.When I am in Australia,I can talk to foreigners,and experience life abroad.Of course I will take good care of myself and others.I would like to see the beautiful scenery in Australia and to have a good time with friends in the summer camp,for which I may have a different and colourful memory.

Hope I will have a chance to go there.I’m looking forward to it!

Thank you!

Yours,

Li Ming

 

实战演练

假如你是李明,你的英国笔友Tony今年暑假要来中国旅游。请你根据下面的提示,给他写一封电子邮件,向他简要介绍一下中国著名的自然景观——黄果树瀑布(Huangguoshu Waterfall)的基本情况。词数80~100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

提示:1.是中国第一大瀑布,也是世界上最美丽的瀑布之一;

2.位于贵州省安顺市,距贵阳市137千米;

3.高77.8米,宽101米,响声震天,几千米之外仍可闻其声;

4.可乘汽车、火车、飞机到达。

Dear Tony,

Last time you told me that you would come to China for travelling this summer,and now I’d like to introduce you something about Huangguoshu Waterfall in my home town because it is really a good place that many tourists don’t want to miss.

Huangguoshu Waterfall is the biggest waterfall in China and it is also one of the most beautiful waterfalls in the world.It is in Anshun,Guizhou,137 km away from Guiyang.People will be surprised at how big it is:77.8 metres high and 101 metres wide.Its loud sound can even be heard miles away.People can choose to take a bus,a train or a plane to get there.Every year,especially in summer,a large number of tourists from China and abroad visit it.

Look forward to seeing you in China.

Yours,

Li Ming

 

 

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