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中考英语作文十大常见错误分析

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英语作文能力的形成不是一日之功,须从平日的课堂学习中一点一滴抓起,持之以恒。或是由于粗心大意,或是由于英语基本功不扎实,抑或是由于英汉语言差异影响,考生作文中经常出现各种错误:如拼写错误,语法错误,中式英语错误等。而在中考英语作文的评分过程中,批卷者是专挑这些错误扣分的。下面分析考生作文中常见的十大错误:

 

1.主谓语一致

主谓一致指主语和谓语在人称、性、数方面的一致。例:

[误] Playing basketball not only strengthen my body but also give me much fun.

[正] Playing basketball not only strengthens my body but also gives me much fun.

分析:当主语和谓语间隔较大时,如此句中not only把主语playing basketball和第一个谓语strengthen分开,第二个谓语更远在but also后,这时很容易出现谓语忘记变化,造成主谓不一致的错误。

 

[误] Three months are quite a long time for me to catch up with other students.

[正] Three months is quite a long time for me to catch up with other students.

分析:当表示时间、长度、距离、金钱、度量等词组作主语时,常将其看作是一个整体,谓语动词要用单数形式。

 

2.动词时态变化

汉语动词无时态变化;而英语中共有16种时态,动词变化复杂。对于初中生而言,难理解和掌握的是现在完成时和过去时的区别。记叙文写作中常用过去时态。例:

[误] When I got to the cinema, the film was on for five minutes.

[正] When I got to the cinema, the film had been on for five minutes.

分析:电影已经开始了,用完成时态。

 

[误] If it won’t rain tomorrow, I’ll go hikingwith my friends in the hills.

[正] If it doesn’t rain tomorrow, I’ll go hikingwith my friends in the hills.

分析:主将从现,初二语法内容。

 

3.冠词缺失

冠词的使用是有一些语法规则的,如go to hospital和go to the hospital意思完全不同,再如so warm a day和such a warm day中冠词的位置是不同的。在学生写作或检查时,冠词往往是最容易被忽略的词。例:

[误] When she was ten,she began to play piano.

[正] When she was ten, she began to play the piano.

分析:表示乐器名词前加the; 与单数名词连用表示一类事物:如the cat;或与形容词或分词连用,表示一类人:the young年轻人,其他规则请参考语法书。

 [误] You will make mistakes if you do things in hurry.

[正] You will make mistakes if you do things in a hurry.

分析:a通常在可数名词单数前,但也有其他用法:如用于抽象名词in a hurry, at a loss, have a try; 用于集体名词a population of 1.3 billion等等。

 

4.代词指代

代词的变化形式首先要与其所指代的对象一致,其次要符合上下文的一致性及其逻辑关系。有些代词的用法要熟记,如one…the other/ another;some…others/ the other+名词; each的用法等等。例:

[误] The Greens tried his best to make me feel at home.

[正] The Greens tried their best to make me feel at home.

分析:the Greens指代一家人,代词应为their.

[误] The writer needs the other three months to finish his book.

[正] The writer needs another three months to finish his book.

分析:需要另外三个月,应用another.

 

5.宾语从句语序

宾语从句的语序问题一直是初中生容易写错的地方,从句部分应是陈述语序。例:

[误] I want to know when should we arrive at the airport? 

[正] I want to know when we should arrive at the airport.

分析:宾语从句中从句部分应用陈述语气,结尾标点符号应根据主句判断。

 

6.定语从句关系代词

定语从句是初中重要语法内容之一。关系代词:修饰人,一般用关系代词who, whom, whose 或that;修饰物,用关系代词which 和that,作宾语时可省略。 例:

[误]This is the only factory which they visited last summer holiday.

[正] This is the only factory that they visited last summer holiday.

分析:先行词被序数词、形容词最高级、或only修饰时,用that引导。

 

[误] Here is the jobwhat you're been looking for since you graduated from the university.

[正] Here is the job that you're been looking for since you graduated from the university.

分析:先行词为指物的不定代词时,定语从句用that来引导,that在从句中作宾语时可省略,而what不能引导定语从句。

 

7.固定搭配

学生们已经背过不少固定搭配,如look forward to +doing sth.;但对部分固定搭配的掌握还不够深刻,做语法题尚可,但在写作中往往常出错,如the reason for sth.而非of,例:

[误] English is very important for us when we go abroad.

[正]English is very important to uswhen we go abroad.

分析:be important to sb.或 be important for sb.to do sth.都是正确的,但无be important for sb.这种搭配,是学生作文中常见错误之一。

 

[误] I've been here for 5 years, so I used to live here.

[正] I've been here for 5 years, so I get used to live here.

分析:used to do表过去常常做某事;be/get used to do习惯于做某事,此句意思应为“习惯于住在这儿”,用be/get used to do

 

8.句子不完整

初中生写文章时思维,词汇,句型不能够全方位兼顾,对英语五种基本句型不能灵活运用,造成句子结构不正确、成分缺失等现象。常常发生在主句讲完后,笔者又想加点补充说明时。例:

[误]There are many ways to know the society.For example by TV, radio, newspaper and so on.

[正] There are many ways to know society, for example, by TV, radio, and newspaper.

分析:本句后半部分“for example by TV, radio, newspaper and so on.”不是一个完整的句子,仅为一些不连贯的词语,不能独立成句。

 

9.中式英语

初中阶段英语接触知识面有限,加之母语影响,学生的作文中经常出现“Chinglish”, 即常说的中式英语现象。如“好好学习,天天向上” 正确的英文翻译是“Study well, and make progress every day.”例:

[误] I very like my English teacher.He is very humorous.

[正] I like my English teacher very much because he has a good sense of humor.

分析:常见中式英语“very”!前后两句为因果关系,用连接词合并。

 

[误] Although my free time is very busy, I still keep doing exercise.

[正] Although I’m very busy in my free time, I still keep doing exercise.

分析:busy应是形容人很忙碌,而非时间;free time前加介词做时间状语。

 

10.低级错误(笔误)

粗心大意:单词拼写错误、词性混淆、大小写、漏写、多写等。如:

I got up was very late, because I fell very tired.

 

 

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