为英语试卷中唯一的主观题，作文分值为满分25分，占了总分的六分之一。是高考英语阅卷的重中之重。是每一位老师，家长，同学关注的焦点。

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高考英语作文的评分标准

内容节选自Aaron讲英语《2019高考英语作文评分解读》

评分参考，作文评分分文5档。

第五档(很好)：(21~25分)

1.完全完成了试题规定的任务。

2.覆盖所有内容要点。

3.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。

4.语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。

5.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。

6.完全达到了预期的写作目的。

第四档(好)：(16~20分)

1.完全完成了试题规定的任务。

2.虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。

3.应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。

4.语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。

5.应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。

6.达到了预期的写作目的。

第三档(适当)：(11~15分)

1.基本完成了试题规定的任务。

2.虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。

3.应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。

4.有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。

5.应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。

6.整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。

第二档(较差)：(6-10分)

1.未恰当完成试题规定的任务。

2.漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。

3.语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。

4.有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。

5.较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。6.信息未能清楚地传达给读者。

第一档(差)：(1~5分)

1.未完成试题规定的任务。

2.明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。

3.语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。

4.较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。

5.缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。

6.信息未能传达给读者。

不得分：(0分)

相信大家都很熟悉这段话，但这个标准是比较模糊的，操作起来不清晰不方便。所以在作文阅卷开始前，专家小组现行挑选出一些具有代表性的试卷让老师们试评，了解具体的实际操作中的评价评分标准。

作文要求

假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：

1.写信目的：

2.个人优势：

3.能做的事情。

注意：

1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;

3.结束语已为你写好。

先谈谈关于作文中的错误，专家组把错误分成两类，第一种是严重错误，例如两个动词的两用，这是不能容忍的。第二种是不影响阅读的错误，比如名词的表述不准确，单词的拼写错误，固定搭配的错误等。

下面请看各档次例文及评价标准。

第五档 23分(21-25)

I am Li Hua, a Chinese student studying in London on this summer Vacation. Knowing that a tremendous Chinese painting gallary will be held, I am writing this letter to recommend myself to be a volunteer.

To begin with, affiliative as I am, I am absolutely convinced that I will be qualified for this role. What’s more, I have been learning Chinese painting for 7 years, which enables me to introduce these charming works to visitors professionally and systematically. Besides,what I can do also includes helping keep tourists in order, sharing my comprehension with them, teaching children to draw some paintings and so on.

I would appreciate it if you can take my application into account. Thanks a lot.

专家组点评：漂漂亮亮，完全完成了写作任务，整篇文章读下来毫无阻力。

首先，文章分三段，层次清晰。第一段表明身份，写作的背景与目的。第二段详细陈述自己的优点及可以为本次展览做的事情，To begin with， What’s more，Besides等承接词的使用让人读起来明明白白。第三段结尾表达客气与感谢。

然后，文章的语言准确，丰富，多变。对于时态，语态，简单句，并列举，复合句，非谓语等运用娴熟。例如， I am Li Hua, a Chinese student studying in London on this summer Vacation. 同位语，现在分词作定语。Knowing that a tremendous Chinese painting gallary will be held, I am writing this letter to recommend myself to be a volunteer. 现在分词做原因状语。 I have been learning Chinese painting for 7 years, which enables me to introduce these charming works to visitors professionally and systematically 非限制性定语从句做补充说明。what I can do also includes helping keep tourists in order, sharing my comprehension with them, teaching children to draw some paintings and so on. 主语从句。

尽管有些许错误和表述不当，但错误不严重，不影响整体理解和交际的功能。如Chinese painting gallary，表述不准确，gallary拼写错误。affiliative as I am，不太准确。

个人觉得要达到这个分数要求还是挺高的，在实际阅卷中，首先字要工整漂亮，给老师的第一印象要好，第二作文中不能有严重错误。第三结构清晰易读。第四要点全覆盖。

第四档 18分(16-20)

I’m LiHua, a Chinese student who is studying in London during my summer vacation. Knowing that the local Painting Museum is going to organize a Chinese Painting exhibition, I”m more than delighted to recommend myself as your volunteer.

As an exchange student from China, I am interested in Chinese painting and know a lot of information and knowledge of it, which is benefit for me to introduce my country’s working to visitors properly.

Besides, not only can I introduce them using my knowledge, but also I can communicate with visitors freely because of my fluent English.

Hope you could give me an opportunity to be a volunteer and learn from this activity.

专家组点评：清清楚楚，完成了写作任务，但整体读下来少量部分有一定阻力，出现个别严重错误。

优点：文章结构清晰，第一段表明身份，写作的背景与目的。第二三段详细陈述自己的优点及可以为本次展览做的事情，使用了Besides等承接词。第四段结尾表达客气与感谢。

语言的使用， I’m LiHua, a Chinese student who is studying in London during my summer vacation. 同位语，定语从句。Knowing that the local Painting Museum is going to organize a Chinese Painting exhibition, I”m more than delighted to recommend myself as your volunteer.

现在分词做原因状语。not only can I introduce them using my knowledge, but also I can communicate with visitors freely because of my fluent English.倒装句。

但在As an exchange student from China, I am interested in Chinese painting and know a lot of information and knowledge of it, which is benefit for me to introduce my country’s working to visitors properly.出现了严重语法错误 is benefit 的连用。

个人观点，本篇文章只出现了一处严重错误，整体文章写的还是很漂亮的，如果是我打分可能会在20分。专家组对于这一档的作文，允许隔三差五出点儿错，也就是可以有三分之一的地方出现表达不准确或者其他不影响阅读理解的小错误。但是对于严重错误容忍度比较低。

第三档 13分(11-15)

How is everything going? I’m Li HUa . A student from China. In this summer holiday, I have some lessons in London. I’m knowing that there is going to be held a Draw Painting Of China. I’m writing to you that I want to be a volunteer.

As is universally acknowledged, the Chinese painting has a long history and it also be known for nowadays. Be s Chinese, I’m so proud of my country. I can speak Chinese of course and other countries language like English, French, Germar or so. although I can’t speak it just like my own language, but It not influence my conversation. Besides, I’m good at Chinese history, so I can interduce the draws history and tell the visitor the story about it. If I can be a volunteer in your art museum, I can be a guide and led visitors to be known for China, and I will clean the place which I charged. I hope to work there very much.

专家组点评：马马虎虎，基本完成了写作任务，但读下来阻力较大，语言运用不熟练错误较多，甚至严重错误数量较多。

本篇文章分两段，层次比较清晰，简单句的使用较多复合句和高级语法使用较少或者使用不准确。好句子，As is universally acknowledged, the Chinese painting has a long history ，其他正确句子其本都是简单句例如How is everything going? I’m Li HUa .In this summer holiday, I have some lessons in London. I’m so proud of my country.I can speak Chinese of course. I’m good at Chinese history.等。 严重错误多A student from China.there is going to be held a Draw Painting Of China. it also be known. It not influence my conversation.等。普通错误包括大小写的使用，词汇的拼写等都比较多，如I’m Li HUa .Germar等

个人觉得这个档次是绝大多数学生的水平，宽容度也比较大，只要学生是按要求认真在写作文，正确使用了一部分简单句，就可以打13-15分。容许有一半对一半错，甚至出现较多的严重错误。

第二档 8分(6-10)

I’m so glad that I could write this letter for become a volunteer about The Chinese Paint exhibition.

Because I’m a Chinese that I can introduct the paint to visitor in Chinese. And I’m a student, I have a lot of time in Summer. I also know more about Chinese paint I can give the useful skills to customer how to look the paint is good or bad.

I wish I can become a Chinese teacher. that I could teach another volunteer to learn Chinese.

If I can be a volunteer, I think I will feel very honor.

专家组点评：糊里糊涂，未恰当完成试题规定的任务。整体阅读下来阻力很大，错误很多，隔三差五有个别对的句子。例如本篇文章的正确句子有I’m so glad that，Because I’m a Chinese， I’m a student, I also know more about Chinese paint，等。

个人觉得这个档次的作文，要求很低。只要看见两三个简单句写对了就可以在这个档次了。

第一档 3分(1-5)

Hearing that art museum are hold on Chinese draw show. I’m more than delighted to join in play a part in volunteer

I writing to letter want to as a volunteer server many people, I come to London study English in unversite. I suitble an volunteer because I can drawa Chinese painting, but I’m Chinese people, so I knowing that Chinese draw characteristic. I know Chinese art characteristic.

I can do the thing is speak to English local people the Chinese draw characteristic.

I hope that join in the volunteer in local art museum.

专家点评：一塌糊涂，完全没有完成写作任务。只有单词没有语法，结构，句子。

个人觉得这个档次就是扶贫了，老师看心情了，字写得多的写的好的可以有4-5分，其他的就1-3分了。只要有My name is Li Hua.就可以给一分了。

最后关于背了作文，但不是这次考试要求的写作，按最后一档给1-3分。关于抄袭阅读理解完形填空的给零分或者一分。

书面表达读背佳作

内容节选自：英语核心素养《高考英语二轮书面表达读背佳作》